Closure--Revised

Softly, tenderly whisper it to me just once more
I must hear it before the closing of the door.

Tell me in that voice that’s wired to my soul
Tell me you love me with a love I alone know.

Hold me, mold me to your charms complete
Soothe me with balmed hands before I sleep.

Of a truth, I need you now as never before,
There is a beckoning from that distant shore.

I tremble now, feeling the fateful hour near
It will cruelly seize what I have ever held dear. 

But we knew in the backburner of our minds
That for every love, time this moment finds.

Softly, tenderly, whisper it to me just once more
Hurry, love, there is a rasping at the door.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Breidenthal Avatar
December 25, 2016 at 1:49 PM
(: Brilliant poem here! Every line is articulate and creative with passion. Thanks for sharing ~JWE ps: a 7 for sure!
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December 31, 2016 at 10:22 PM
You're welcome! (: Awesome! Thanks, you too! Happy 2017 to you too. (:
Schneiter Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 5:11 PM
Thank you, JW. Your kind words give me the courage to face a blank computer screen (and oh how I need that). I hope all is well with you and your loved ones, and that 2017 brings blessings.
Rigoler Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 6:15 PM
Beautifully written and expressed. Love the expression "backburner of our minds". Thanks for posting this romantic poem. Keep writing. / M
Schneiter Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 6:26 PM
Thank you, Maurice. I was close to giving up on it. Your kind, timely words made me reconsider. So, I'm especially grateful for your comment.
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