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Closure To Rest

Give me some time to let this love go, To rid all the pain, OH how it grows, You’ve changed me forever, I’ll never forget, Your words of advice, I gave much respect, You helping me change, And how not to forget, I give all my thanks, With no regrets Of how much I cared Don’t ever forget How strong my love was Too strong for you yet Forever my love And forever was it meant Until you said never So nevers what you'll get Yet forever in my heart Is where this love sits As I feel like im stuck in a bottomless pit Stuck am I not Just in a big mess These feelings they kill I just don’t want the stress Of this love that’s so strong I now put it to rest To rid all my fears Stuck inside of my chest Its closure I need In order to rest I have now gotten it all Off of my chest Thanks for your time And for holding your breath Now you should know of this love in my chest

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Date: 9/7/2023 2:00:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your wisdom through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/4/2016 11:44:00 AM
Stephanie straw, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back to read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**
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Date: 9/9/2015 8:58:00 AM
Stephanie, enjoyed reading your verse today. SKAT
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Date: 4/1/2015 9:43:00 AM
What a wonderful way to sing healing to your soul. Your poem reminds me of a time when I felt pain of gloomy colors; yet it is well written, letting me feel your hurt. But all is never lost, we live and learn, courageously.
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Date: 2/11/2013 11:10:00 PM
very well penned i enjoyed thank you for sharing
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