Closure of You

Awakened with all seeing eye
Focussing, turn away and sigh
An empty space, I have to try
Feeling all askew

Take memory of distant times
Everywhere, as committed crimes
Regretful, revisited mimes
Urgent to renew

A saviour imparts one word
Passing comment mis-heard
To impart meaning kindly shared
Thankfully time flew

Now, I awaken in the morn
Watch silhouetted rising dawn
A sudden plume of hope is born
Closure of you




Date - 7/28/20
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