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Closing My Eyes

I still feel your kiss
Your arms around my waist
The warmth of your skin
And your hair in my face.

I wish I could tell you
I love you one more time,
But I know you don’t want me
And it’s hard to close my mind.

You were the girl of my dreams
Who crept into my life.
I was ready for you to stay
But my love did not suffice.

Such a beautiful face
And a gorgeous mind,
But who was I to think
I’d be the only one you’d find?

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Shaz Cheesman

Date: 10/5/2012 7:40:00 AM

Aaaaw this is sad. Loved the flow and the journey it took me on...glad I stopped by - Shaz

Tracy Edwards

Date: 10/2/2012 10:35:00 PM

Such a heart breaker... ' it’s hard to close my mind.'.. nice line and so true xx

Danielle Criswell

Date: 5/7/2011 11:04:00 PM

I know exactly how this feels. I'm going through it now. Very good write.

Mourning Mist

Date: 5/7/2011 10:02:00 PM

she tells many people on social sites that her mind is something very special..genius..sorry to hear about your luck but those two lines whispered secrets to spirit is all

Mourning Mist

Date: 5/7/2011 10:01:00 PM

you remind of someone i know with the vanity of the beautiful face and gorgeous mind, she used to tell people on digg that she had a mental disease that she did not get treated, cut her arms and so forth, anyhow on one posting on digg she claimed that her insanity was actually bordering on being a genius LOL the posting on digg mentioned the similarity of genius and insane, and she was that vain to claim she had a mind of a genius..imagine? sorry you reminded me of her..