Closing

There I stood at deaths door,
                                                    Not yet lord , I do implore
                                                    a little longer i'd like to live
                                                    lots of love I'd like to give;
                                                    I'd like to create a little hype
                                                    as I set my words to type
                                                    to let all in my life to know
                                                    how much I care before I go.
                                                    all is appreciated, that has been done
                                                    every deed remembered, forgotten none
                                                    thank you all for your precious time
                                                    as through my life , I did climb
                                                    and to the one who saved my life
                                                    I wish to attain you as my wife.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Nutter Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 7:18 AM
Wonderful rhythm and rhyme and such a sweet message. Enjoyed
Peranteau Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 6:45 AM
An honest prayer here dear poet ! Nice write to read this morning ! Have a blessed day...much love, james
Williams Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 5:36 AM
Ronald yep cool words..David
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