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Closer To Fine

Darkness engulfs my lone soul, Like a big black gaping hole, Falling deeper and deeper, Like an unending creeper Into the bottomless pit Of dank depression, I quit, "I am fine", I answer all, But in dead despair, I crawl, Lost in labyrinthine mind, Elusive light, will I find? Doubts nag, fears overcome me, Tenebrous mirage, I see, Spiralling down to a chasm, Hope is a far off phantasm, Caliginous courage lost, This void feeling does exhaust, These clouds will soon pass, they say, Broken, on my knees, I pray, "Lord, lift me up, give me peace, Tantalizing turmoil cease" Tears run down like a river, Peace enfolds as I shiver, Prayer answered, darkness gone, I spy the light of the dawn, Healed purely by grace divine, Now, I am closer to fine.
16th February 2023

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Date: 2/17/2023 12:13:00 PM
Nice pen Jo, lovely rhyme and flow with good insightfulness too. Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 2/17/2023 1:38:00 AM
One cannot admire the use of vocabulary and imagery in this poem.
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Date: 2/17/2023 1:20:00 AM
Great piece of writing
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Date: 2/16/2023 7:07:00 PM
Jo, such fantastic work that is a delight to read and take pleasure in. Your work is made even more beautiful by the wondrous diction and metaphors you use. Win big
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