Margarita Lillico Poet Rhyme

Closer To Fine

Whether strong or weak
I still search and seek -
Asking questions,
Questioning answers -
For insights I pine,
So long to be fine.

In darkness I'm lost 
Trying at all cost -
Asking questions,
Questioning answers -
Climb toward sunshine,
So long to be fine.

Once I tame my fear,
See finally clear -
Asking questions,
Questioning answers -
I dare to define, 
I'm closer to fine. 

February 15, 2023

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David Smith July 12, 2024 at 2:46 PM Totally relatable. Totally genuine thoughts put to paper in this way work to good effect. Altering words or rephrasing for this type of poem negates its purpose, so well done for letting the words tumble out and fall where they might. Best regards David in NZ

Daniel Turner March 7, 2023 at 9:27 AM Asking questions, questioning answers, that to me is life in a nutshell. great philosophical write, Maggie.

Speaks Volumes February 20, 2023 at 6:27 PM A lovely poem. So nicely planned and written. It reads beautifully. Margarita Lillico February 20, 2023 at 7:30 PM Thank you.

Paula Goldsmith February 17, 2023 at 10:52 AM A wonderful write. Good Luck. Have a blessed day/weekend................... Margarita Lillico February 20, 2023 at 7:30 PM Thank you.

Joanna Daniel February 15, 2023 at 9:55 PM Yeah, I agree with DD, love the rhythm and beat in this beautiful write:) Margarita Lillico February 20, 2023 at 7:30 PM Thank you.