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Closer To Fine

Whether strong or weak I still search and seek - Asking questions, Questioning answers - For insights I pine, So long to be fine. In darkness I'm lost Trying at all cost - Asking questions, Questioning answers - Climb toward sunshine, So long to be fine. Once I tame my fear, See finally clear - Asking questions, Questioning answers - I dare to define, I'm closer to fine. February 15, 2023

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Date: 3/7/2023 9:27:00 AM
Asking questions, questioning answers, that to me is life in a nutshell. great philosophical write, Maggie.
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Date: 2/20/2023 6:27:00 PM
A lovely poem. So nicely planned and written. It reads beautifully.
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/20/2023 7:30:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 2/17/2023 10:52:00 AM
A wonderful write. Good Luck. Have a blessed day/weekend...................
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/20/2023 7:30:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 2/15/2023 9:55:00 PM
Yeah, I agree with DD, love the rhythm and beat in this beautiful write:)
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/20/2023 7:30:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 2/15/2023 7:43:00 AM
I love this one, so lyrical!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/15/2023 7:58:00 AM
Tough one too to come up with;)

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