Sara Kendrick Poet Verse

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I found pictures of Envelope Quintets on the internet..They are when someone writes them on an envelope or sends them to someone in a letter..

Closer Than a Kiss

The zephyr that I couldn't dismiss
And pouring rain only sounds heard
Then the Spirit gave a good word
Go to sleep_rest, Spirit did undergird
God's presence, closer than a kiss  

Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
contest: A Catch-Phrase Dazzler: 1 In 5 Choice
Written: December 26, 2012

Envelope Quintet/ information found
Meter at the discretion of writer
Rhyme scheme can be_a, b, b, b, a or 
a, b, c, b, a(usually when more than one stanza 
then the stanzas interlock)

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Kimmy Thieleke January 12, 2013 at 8:50 PM Beautiful ma'ma.. hello there nice to meet you .

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 9, 2013 at 2:08 AM Belated congratulations on your winning spot Sara xx

Andrea Dietrich January 8, 2013 at 7:12 PM congrats to you, Sara. I especially loved the last line!!

Debbie Guzzi January 8, 2013 at 6:32 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Reggae Magnet January 3, 2013 at 9:57 AM Nice write, surprise me here.

Apoorva Patrikar December 31, 2012 at 6:15 AM i personally love this one :) on soup after a long long time, happy new year!

Keith Bickerstaffe December 29, 2012 at 12:03 PM BRAVO Sara! So well composed, with a smooth flow, excellent rhyming and an inspirational message! Best wishes, Keith

Ralph Mason December 27, 2012 at 8:08 AM Enjoyed reading your poem dear Sara. Wishing you a wonderful holiday season. Warmest thoughts, Ralph

Poet Destroyer A December 26, 2012 at 8:49 PM Sara, i like this... beautiful... pd

Toquyen Harrell December 26, 2012 at 6:56 PM Yes, very. Love it, Sara. Good luck with the contest!

Don Johnson December 26, 2012 at 2:46 PM yes i feel his presence, when the angels show us bliss

Ajayi Angel-Simon December 26, 2012 at 1:08 PM descriptive... ture! the intimacy of the Spirit glues one to the Father

Mehnaz Veetil December 26, 2012 at 11:13 AM Enlightening write , enjoyed.

Russell Sivey December 26, 2012 at 8:14 AM This is a wondrous write my friend! I really lovred reading this amazing and powerful poem this morning! what a delightful and pleasant piece, Great Work!!

Jancarl Campi December 26, 2012 at 7:40 AM I like this one. Thanks for reading my poem (Heckle & Jeckle) It was a horrible time.

Len Gasun December 26, 2012 at 7:38 AM Excellent and extremely wonderful verse which uplifts one's spirit my dear friend, Sara. God's presence is really closer than a kiss. A winning piece for me! Thank you so much for sharing! Merry Christmas to you and your love ones! Wishing you all the best. love always, Leonora

Victoria Anderson-Throop December 26, 2012 at 7:25 AM not familiar with this 'envelope quintet', but it is a lovely write... i like the word 'zephyr'....