D.A Hopkins Poet Rhyme

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A flook hospital visit would forever change me
last person I would have thought to ever see
I thought your love was finally going to come
little did I know the pain it would have brung
I should have just let you finally go
But I had to hope one last time as your daughter
before I would forever let you go
sometimes a mother can not love, this child she birthed
sorrow for her
sorrow for me
sorrow for her grand-babies
It's time to finally move on
this church is now becoming our family
I'm feeling the joy and to be blessed
I am beginning to feel my heart at rest
they except me and my family
this is just the way it ought to be
I have so much love inside me
The time trying to make you see
is time now spent loving my family
If you decide to see it in time
you will be aright for I'm not hard to find

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Kim Morrison June 8, 2013 at 8:13 AM Again you write with a lot of passion here, but you have a few minor mistakes that take away from it. You do not need the first "I." The "atrest" should have a space between "at" and "rest." "Brung" should be brought and "ourt" should be ought. You might have been going for a dialect here, but unless the rest is written that way they look like errors. Good Job! Kim