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Close My Eyes

close my eyes, wide awake
lie still and try to fake
all my thoughts far away
counting sheep come here to play

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/19/2012 8:32:00 AM
Hey, this is a lovely rhyme. It reminds me of the feeling I have when I want to sleep but my brain is on overload -not a nice feeling(and counting sheep doesn't work!). Nice! Very nice!
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