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Eyes close, with pain for this night. I ask for it all. I call to the world, hands are shaking. Mind skips, to when we first met. The bounce in our step. We were happier then, kids were laughing. Lips purse, as the spirit seeps out. It weakens with ice. There's a chill in your eyes, heart is thirsting. Love songs, will carry my words. These voices are full. They've been blocked by the walls, and they're deepening. Tears flow, as the stars disappear. The moon is alone. Where did the light go, we are hurting.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/25/2016 6:28:00 PM
Such a beautiful sad nostalgic moments of better days...So deep.
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Grant Norwood
Date: 10/25/2016 10:05:00 PM
Thanks for reading Charmaine, appreciate your comments
Date: 10/16/2016 2:18:00 PM
English quintain rhyme scheme ababb with no set foot or meter. Probably doesn't qualify, Grant but still a good write:)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 10/16/2016 7:02:00 PM
no rhymes, possibly free verse would be my guess but then again what do I know? Still a good write:)
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Grant Norwood
Date: 10/16/2016 4:02:00 PM
Thanks. Didn't know what else to call it.

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