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Crazy life crowded with pain
Loving and leaving not ever again
On the run from feelings and winning the race
Suddenly you're there.. invading my space
Echos of laughter as close as can be
  ~ as love everlasting closes in upon me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 18, 2010 at 1:12 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing!! Karen
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May 18, 2010 at 7:33 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Patricia. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol
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