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time moves very s l o w when I wait for my loved one watch that stands alone
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Derden Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 6:07 PM
Your piece beautifully captured that feeling of suspended time and longing.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2025 at 7:23 PM
Indeed! The clock when watched movea slowly.
Dietrich Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 11:31 PM
I really like how you did yours. Great job, Robert
Greenhough Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 6:54 AM
So true. Anticipation is torture.
Crandall Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 7:04 PM
good one - the waiting is the hardest part :-)
Dietrich Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 4:49 PM
I agree with Ink. You do these well
Empress Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 12:31 PM
Dear Robert You are very good at haiku, and this is beautiful and youv shown through your words, how slow time is when waiting for a loved one , whether family or a lover, it does seem that way ye , and i always love a poem about time, and you did it very well in 575! Brilliant and soulfully moving! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always
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