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time moves very s l o w when I wait for my loved one watch that stands alone

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2025 11:31:00 PM

I really like how you did yours. Great job, Robert

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/12/2025 6:54:00 AM

So true. Anticipation is torture.

David Crandall

Date: 5/9/2025 7:04:00 PM

good one - the waiting is the hardest part :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2025 4:49:00 PM

I agree with Ink. You do these well

Ink Empress

Date: 5/5/2025 12:31:00 PM

Dear Robert You are very good at haiku, and this is beautiful and youv shown through your words, how slow time is when waiting for a loved one , whether family or a lover, it does seem that way ye , and i always love a poem about time, and you did it very well in 575! Brilliant and soulfully moving! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always