Juliet Ligon Poet Triolet

Clinging To Undulating Lines

I studied your vital signs 
as time was in question,
clinging to undulating lines.
I studied your vital signs,
emotions mirroring their declines,
desperate for a receptive expression.
I studied your vital signs 
as time was in question.

5-21-2021
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Sara Kendrick May 26, 2021 at 5:34 PM This one reads like a scary situation. Way to go for the contest. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Kim Merryman May 25, 2021 at 8:15 PM Juliet, congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Juliet Ligon May 25, 2021 at 9:00 PM Thanks for the contest, Kim. I'd never tried a triolet before.

Connie Marcum Wong May 25, 2021 at 12:43 PM Wow Juliet, this poem has a powerful impact on the emotions. A top winner for me. Congratulations on your win. Have a great week. Blessings xxoo Juliet Ligon May 25, 2021 at 8:59 PM Thanks, Connie.

Sam Kauffman May 25, 2021 at 11:29 AM Juliet, congratulations on this poem of emotional depth that illustrates the experience of so many watching those "undulating lines" and hoping. So well done! Juliet Ligon May 25, 2021 at 8:59 PM Thanks, Sam.

Paula Goldsmith May 25, 2021 at 10:06 AM Congratulations on your win. A creative write. You said, "I studied your vital signs." Am I OK??? Have a blessed day..................... Juliet Ligon May 25, 2021 at 10:13 AM LOL, I sure hope you're okay, Paula. Bless your heart.

Quoth Theraven May 22, 2021 at 3:12 PM Juliet, 'I studied your vital signs ~~ clinging to undulating lines.' Oh me oh my... You gave my mind a sound thrashing in this poem. I thank you for that. -Richard Juliet Ligon May 22, 2021 at 9:46 PM Thanks for your continued support.

Regina Mcintosh May 22, 2021 at 6:43 AM Wow. So powerful. Love it. God bless you. Love, Gina Juliet Ligon May 22, 2021 at 9:45 PM Thanks, Regina. God bless you.