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Clinging To Undulating Lines

I studied your vital signs as time was in question, clinging to undulating lines. I studied your vital signs, emotions mirroring their declines, desperate for a receptive expression. I studied your vital signs as time was in question. 5-21-2021 Try a Triolet Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Date: 5/26/2021 5:34:00 PM
This one reads like a scary situation. Way to go for the contest. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 5/25/2021 8:15:00 PM
Juliet, congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 5/25/2021 9:00:00 PM
Thanks for the contest, Kim. I'd never tried a triolet before.
Date: 5/25/2021 12:43:00 PM
Wow Juliet, this poem has a powerful impact on the emotions. A top winner for me. Congratulations on your win. Have a great week. Blessings xxoo
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 5/25/2021 8:59:00 PM
Thanks, Connie.
Date: 5/25/2021 11:29:00 AM
Juliet, congratulations on this poem of emotional depth that illustrates the experience of so many watching those "undulating lines" and hoping. So well done!
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 5/25/2021 8:59:00 PM
Thanks, Sam.
Date: 5/25/2021 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. You said, "I studied your vital signs." Am I OK??? Have a blessed day.....................
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 5/25/2021 10:13:00 AM
LOL, I sure hope you're okay, Paula. Bless your heart.
Date: 5/22/2021 3:12:00 PM
Juliet, 'I studied your vital signs ~~ clinging to undulating lines.' Oh me oh my... You gave my mind a sound thrashing in this poem. I thank you for that. -Richard
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 5/22/2021 9:46:00 PM
Thanks for your continued support.
Date: 5/22/2021 6:43:00 AM
Wow. So powerful. Love it. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 5/22/2021 9:45:00 PM
Thanks, Regina. God bless you.

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