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...Clinging Tears

clinging tears
freeze to barren branches...
empty lawnchairs rust

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David Smalling

November 11, 2010 at 10:40 AM

With poems like this you convert me to believe brevity is best, because you handle it with so much genius and finesse

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

November 7, 2010 at 9:14 AM

oh what a sad write this time but I really like that, "clinging tears" & of how you related it to those rusty lawn chairs-- nikko :)

Sara Kendrick

November 5, 2010 at 4:56 PM

Old man winter hurts..Good job in describing him..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

November 5, 2010 at 2:42 PM

Love your words and expressions in this sad write...love Michael

Carrie Richards

November 5, 2010 at 8:54 AM

ahh....makes me weep a bit for losing the warm sun...

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 5, 2010 at 8:00 AM

I see this picture in my backyard for the last eight days. but today, snow is predicted in the afternoon, Debbie. very greate images,

Honesty Oimbo

November 5, 2010 at 7:54 AM

it is a sharp obsevation

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 5, 2010 at 7:28 AM

yes TEACH we are having lots of rain as tears here in N.J. for three days now... flooding stage has arrived but your clinging tears are lovely to read this happy weekend...enjoyed..

Eamon Duffin

November 5, 2010 at 7:19 AM

Hi Deborah. Beautiful words . Thank you for your advice, I will work on it tonight. Thanks again, Eamon

...Clinging Tears

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