thriveni c mysore Poet Rhyme

climate dilemma

As red summer cindered
mercilessly dried up water sources so much
left life parched

lives prayed prayers
Monsoon winds dashed with ardor such
downpours

life dead
by nature's touch
End

As red summer cindered
Monsoon winds dashed with ardor such
End

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David Crandall July 22, 2024 at 9:04 PM Climate change must dramatically affect your part of the world - extremes of dry and wet. I think your poem shows the harshness of that contrast.

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2024 at 4:16 PM You did very well with this form. Great images thriveni c mysore July 16, 2024 at 8:08 PM i didn't know it was a difficult form, i tried for the first time. thank you dear poet friend, your visit is a joy. Blessings & Cheers

Nette Onclaud July 13, 2024 at 11:36 PM may we restore the natural state of our environ...I enjoyed the brevity kind of your work! thriveni c mysore July 14, 2024 at 8:24 PM thank you dear poet for your visit. I am glad you liked it. Blessings & Cheers.