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climate dilemma

As red summer cindered mercilessly dried up water sources so much left life parched lives prayed prayers Monsoon winds dashed with ardor such downpours life dead by nature's touch End As red summer cindered Monsoon winds dashed with ardor such End

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David Crandall

Date: 7/22/2024 9:04:00 PM

Climate change must dramatically affect your part of the world - extremes of dry and wet. I think your poem shows the harshness of that contrast.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2024 4:16:00 PM

You did very well with this form. Great images

thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/16/2024 8:08:00 PM

i didn't know it was a difficult form, i tried for the first time. thank you dear poet friend, your visit is a joy. Blessings & Cheers

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/13/2024 11:36:00 PM

may we restore the natural state of our environ...I enjoyed the brevity kind of your work!

thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/14/2024 8:24:00 PM

thank you dear poet for your visit. I am glad you liked it. Blessings & Cheers.