Click, Click, Huh

Feeble, a word not often used in this hi-def, mega bite world, where almost anything can be done with the tap of a fingertip, the aged still feel feeble. This crackled feeling runs along the rims of brittle nails and gray-white strands of hair. The once svelte figures of maid or man, now chose more often to crunch and snap, as ligaments roll unpleasantly over joint heads. The witty repartee of youth is replaced by a dazed look. Yes, at this moment, après gym and post nap and pre chair massage a wobbling frailness surrounds me in a weak chicken broth of feebleness.
fingerless mits cover bloodless palms – weak spring sun emotion: feeble poet: Debbie Guzzi Contest: How Do I Feel Today

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Date: 4/7/2013 10:04:00 AM
Debbie ha I love this, it sums me up to a tee as well....David
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Date: 4/6/2013 10:53:00 AM
Hey Debbie, wow, I am still feeling this one and I might be for a while. Very visceral and commands an emotional response. Powerful is an understatement, this is hurricane force. Soup mail, also. -Jeremy
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Date: 4/5/2013 11:56:00 AM
As always, your descriptions are wonderful! And you finished them off with an awesome haiku too! This one is going into my favourites.
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Date: 4/5/2013 8:36:00 AM
A powerful & tough reality to face. This is a very, very strong piece. Hi & long time no see!
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Date: 4/4/2013 2:29:00 PM
I remember thinking that it looked like this one guy in particular really missed someone suddenly. And that's me with camo all over my face...haha
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Date: 4/4/2013 2:06:00 PM
Awe, Debbie...it doesn't sound like you feel very good today at all...but you LOOK good! ;)
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