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Clearying Out the Closet

There’s a curve in my perception that’s in dire need of straightening To deter the insurrection I’ve called ‘my spiritual awakening’ My ego is faced with the fact that it’s on a need to know basis and it’s on the attack Which consists of my being pissed off, with bad habits shouting 'viva la resistance!’ Means tested, faults considered You’re the standing evil that’s delivered Everything I’ve ever wanted Whilst your sleight of hand goes for my watch Stealing, rinsing we’re both haunted Now forsaken comes the final cotch Something bigger the both of us turns pages that are frayed and withered I can’t believe it’s been this long yet still so badly botched Standing Delivered Stood Remisson http://samnicholasharrison.tumblr.com/

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/30/2016 8:59:00 PM
Sam N icholas, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Sam Nicholas Harrison
Date: 9/10/2016 9:25:00 PM
thanks for the kind words! and sorry it's taken me a while to reply. some of your poems are very poignant, you have a knack for conjuring up a good sense of melancholy. I may take you up on your offer of criticism at some point. cheers!
Date: 7/29/2016 7:30:00 PM
Looks clear to me, Sam,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Sam Nicholas Harrison
Date: 9/10/2016 9:21:00 PM
thanks for the kind comment, I love some of your bits, I noticed you haven't been writing recently, so I hope you get back to writing some time soon, i'd be keen to read some more.

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