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Clearer Than Mud

In my heart is pain that can't be undone No joy in life, no laughter no fun Once two broken hearts came together to make one whole Now just two separate hearts and one shattered soul You filled my day with peace and light Now my days are dim not bright I had serenity with you that calmed the storm A place that kept me safe and warm I gave you my heart and you gave me yours But shattered to pieces they're both on the floors With no understanding of what went wrong My feelings fit into poem and song I loved you then and I do still I didn't stop and I never will My first love to whom I gave my all I willingly fell into love's siren call There is a saying I do believe It means so much to me "If you love something set it free, if it comes back its meant to be." I never wanted to let you go With you gone its only hurt that I know I don't really understand as to why All I know is you're reasoning is partially a lie So make me understand as to why you aren't my man

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/6/2013 5:48:00 PM

wow Kayla, the poem pours with perfect confused emotions. 15 minutes wow! love it -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@....

Kayla Obrien
Date: 8/7/2013 7:02:00 AM

Thank you

Stormy Smith

Date: 8/6/2013 1:59:00 PM

Very well spoken, like a true poet you take your emotions and pour them out onto the page. Very brilliantly penned.

Kayla Obrien
Date: 8/7/2013 7:02:00 AM

Thank you and thank you again for showing me this site. I love it. I can express myself and get positive feed back that makes me smile :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/6/2013 11:12:00 AM

Hello new member Kayla ! - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kayla Obrien
Date: 8/6/2013 11:30:00 AM

Thank you

Kayla Obrien

Date: 8/6/2013 10:27:00 AM

Believe it or not this is something I literally just wrote about an hour or so ago and it only took me about 15 minutes. I just let my current situation and the emotions behind it out onto a peice of paper and then onto this site that a friend of mine showed me. Emotions are a great thing sometimes.

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/6/2013 10:21:00 AM

I know the pain & grinding curiosity behind your lines here. From what I've learned, not everything has an immediate reason. This was very well done.

Kayla Obrien
Date: 8/6/2013 10:24:00 AM

Thank you.

Skat A

Date: 8/6/2013 9:37:00 AM

Hello Kayla, good questions, hope the answers are as clear as rain ,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT xoxo

Stormy Smith
Date: 8/6/2013 2:02:00 PM

Haven't heard from you in forever Skat, its good to see that your welcoming my friend to the website, and that goes to all of the rest of you guys and gals out there too. Lets all aspire to let her inner poet rise up and shine Brilliantly.

Kayla Obrien
Date: 8/6/2013 9:52:00 AM

Hello, thanks for the feedback. I appreciate. Actually I have a friend who is a fellow poet on here and he showed me the site. There isn't much to know about me. I am just a young woman who has had a tough life, trying to make it in the adult world, and currently going through a break-up with my first love. Lots of good poems to come from that though so it is all good:-)