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Clear Waters

The blue waters shine
Reflecting the distant sky
Seagulls swim, I smile

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Shirin Neshat

April 30, 2009 at 1:32 AM

good one.

Adeleke Adeite

April 11, 2009 at 7:44 AM

great poem, awesome poet. this piece is great keeep writing friend. "LONG TIME".. love Leke

March 17, 2009 at 3:59 PM

I'm smiling too, glad I ran across this poem today. What a day brightener. Keep on writing and sharing your work with us. Karen

Lucinda Bulger

January 5, 2009 at 5:48 AM

This simplicity of words fit together with beauty. A very nice morning read... Lucinda

Brian Strand

December 31, 2008 at 3:08 AM

You capture the image flavour Farah.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Christopher Higgins

December 30, 2008 at 8:55 AM

Wonderful Haiku young one(I love that you signed that after commenting) You don't write like the young but more the talented one..beautiful Haiku my friend..I love the water, and the bright sky, all great images..Love, Chris.

Raul Moreno

December 29, 2008 at 12:47 PM

Excellent haiku Farah, it reminds me of the haiku's my friend Steve Edmonds writes. You painted a lovely scene with your words. I hope you have a Happy and safe New Year.

Laura Mckenzie

December 28, 2008 at 8:07 PM

UHHA Farah Lovely Haiku indeed I love the last line! Happy New Year! Laura :)

John Rhinem

December 28, 2008 at 6:53 PM

Smile~You see~these are the moments to always keep your eyes upon, as much as is possible~never take a moment of life for grantite, or waste even one breath if you can help it!? "Hello Again Precious & Gifted Farah Chamma!"~This write was almost like a serene painting, which you stroked with the brush of your pretty pen~very lovely dear young lady! Smile~"You are a unique treasure among your peers~so always shine brightly!"~"Much Love To You & Yours, Always, John!"~"Happy New Year!":)

Sean Kelly

December 28, 2008 at 11:15 AM

Nice , warm , perfect Haiku of clear H2o ... Well done TYone :) .....

December 27, 2008 at 5:20 PM

I'm smiling too. I enjoyed this poem. Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Keep up the good writing. I wish you a wonderful New Year! Karen

Jay Del Fierro

December 27, 2008 at 12:11 PM

very well done,my young friend...the usage of this short format,to convey the allegory of the levels of water we all swim....i'm smiling with you dear Farah :)....hope all is well,and enjoy the new coming year......always , jay