Clear

Ocean
Beauty so deep
Laughing while I'm splashing
Wild abandon in my mind
Peaceful
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 6:52 AM
so luv abandoning my mind especially at the beach in the ocean Kristen..very refreshing one my friend..luv..
Tacito Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 5:29 AM
Sigh...yes indeed. Beautiful.
Seraphin Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 11:12 PM
* “Wow * Such A Pristine & Tranquil Setting Yet * Almost Rapturous In Feelings Evoked Amid The Joy of Hearts Reflection Found * Ocean * Beauty * Laughing * Splashing * Wild Abandon * Peace * Perfection In Beauty Dear Lovely Kristen * A Beautiful Fave * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Sarah” *
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May 15, 2011 at 10:10 PM
Nice cinquain about the ocean! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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