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Cleanliness Freak Serial Killer Mom

Dear Lord please have gentle mercy There has surely been a worst she. Please help me spare her worthless life. Wasn’t most horrible mom and wife. Serial killer? Simple she? Dear Lord, please have gentle mercy. Victims from that faraway town. Evidence illegally found. Dear Lord, please have gentle mercy. There has surely been a worse she. Her spotless house is always clean. Maybe that’s what made her completely mean?

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Date: 2/16/2019 10:10:00 PM
Yep, cleaning makes me lose it, too.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/16/2019 11:57:00 PM
I do not understand or derive any pleasure from cleaning at all.
Date: 2/15/2019 8:31:00 PM
LOL All of us who believe there are better things to do than housecleaning should stick together. I like your poem, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/16/2019 1:31:00 AM
Thank you Line. I have met the most uptight cleanliness women in the world, and I know I should not generalize people but....

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