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Cleaning Up

A country road, a clutch of crows And this is how it went: They’d land right in the middle With mysterious intent. They’d hunt and peck until a car Would come a bit too near, Then they’d fly off and swoop back down Right when the coast was clear. Their new spot, though, was farther Down the road from where they’d been And then the hunt and peck routine Would once again begin. My husband figured out the cause, For on that stretch of tar Are critters squished beneath the wheels Of every passing car. So all those crows were cleaning up The frogs, the slugs, the worms That we would never notice As we walk along the berms.

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Date: 9/10/2020 12:02:00 PM
Yet no one has trained crows to select what we want them to clean up! Plus a crow's nest is the last thing you would want on your roof! The noise and poop are unbelievable! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 9/9/2020 7:18:00 PM
A very important function they serve on the food chain! The teenage crow asked his mother what's for dinner. The mom replied, "Carrion, my wayward son".
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Date: 9/9/2020 7:00:00 PM
Well, this is certainly one to crow about, Ilene! Interesting stuff about crows. Who would have known?! Watch the Birdie! ~ Gershon
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Date: 9/9/2020 2:57:00 PM
It sounds like the crows do the same thing as vultures when they clean up the "critters" on the road. You've probably had to wait for them to fly away before proceeding down the road. A very interesting "slice-of-life" poem, the kind at which you excel, Ilene. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 9/9/2020 2:21:00 PM
Strangely, crows are one of my favorite birds! Loved the wit in this write, Ilene! Did you know that a bunch of crows is also called a murder of crows? Bob
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 9/9/2020 3:26:00 PM
Hey Bob! Good to hear from you! Yes, I did know about a “murder” of crows (what a cool term!), but I needed a 1 syllable word and I liked the alliteration..

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