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Clean Slate

A divine moment that allows introspection. As the sun lowers, night offers protection. Deserving of silence while I take it all in, catching a glimpse of a Dolphin's fin. Briefly the sky is a coloring book, as if children had crayons and somehow mistook the big blue canvas as a clean slate to paint magic and start to create. New memories and a new day tomorrow, abandon cobwebs and moments of sorrow. Lowering the hours of this day allowing the next morning to be o.k. Taking my breath away I feel emotion that's been at bay. (by: kristen bruni for Sunset vs Sunrise Contest)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/28/2011 5:19:00 PM
Enjoyed reading very much..Creative for sure..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/26/2011 6:54:00 PM
Kristen, a pleasure to see your poem's recognition. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/26/2011 12:58:00 PM
Beautiful poem.Congrats Kristen on your win....
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Date: 5/26/2011 3:52:00 AM
Many congrats Kristen on HM win in HG's contest with this excellent entry. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 5/25/2011 6:39:00 PM
Congrats Kristen on your HM in HG's contest with this vivid and vibrant entry my friend.. enjoy ..luv..
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Date: 5/25/2011 3:33:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of HG, kristen
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Date: 5/25/2011 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in HG's contest Kristen. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/14/2011 12:56:00 AM
very creative, Kristen and I really liked the part about the dolphin!
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Date: 5/13/2011 7:57:00 PM
wow and wonderful Kristen.. this is really a clean slate of emotion and expressive for the contest theme..good luck with this magnificent entry .. am sure it will do super well ..happy weekend..
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Date: 5/13/2011 3:58:00 PM
The inspiratiion that comes as night covers us is eloquently expressed, Kristen. I think the sponsor wanted us to specify we were writing about either Sunset or Sunrise, though it is very clear to me that you are talking about the peace that comes with sunset and how we begin each dy with a "clean slate." Well done! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
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