Classical Elements - 1 - Water

symbolic element 

for intelligence and wisdom 

water .. unknown depths





note : i will do all 5 natural elements 

1/ water 
2/ wood 
3/ earth
4/ fire 
5/ metal
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Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 3:46 AM
Interesting work here. Keep writing. Sara
Delacroix Avatar
September 26, 2009 at 8:52 PM
Oh, by the way, I wanted to tell you that there are actually 4 elements, "air, water, earth and fire". Wood and metal would belong to earth I believe. Just a thought. :) Caroline.
Delacroix Avatar
September 26, 2009 at 8:50 PM
Nicely written Haiku. Interesting imagery. Had to read your poem after seeing your name and realized you are from Belgium. Although I live in california, I am originally from Belgium. I was born in Renaix/Ronse. It is nice to meet a fellow poet from the ""old country" so to speak. I will read more of your work. Caroline.
Curcio Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 9:05 AM
This is beautiful - Onto the next element :-)
Burton Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 11:30 PM
another great piece.. enjoy your night! :)
Moreno Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 10:26 AM
Creative series Marco, these elements represent life...Raul
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