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Class Dismiss Your outer beauty that blinds me~but your inner ugliness I see. 2019 December 22 *2nd Place* One liner ~~Silent One

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Date: 12/28/2019 12:40:00 PM

Ouch. Painful.

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/28/2019 12:54:00 PM

When they say, "I do", should have said, "I don't" ... lol ~ Aloha always William

Date: 12/27/2019 8:25:00 PM

I really like this, William. Yes, inner ugliness can be quite easy to see when you get to know certain people. Congrats on the win

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/27/2019 8:34:00 PM

So true Andrea, many times after wedding bells, the truth eeks out, --thanks and my compliments to you as well ~ Aloha always William

Date: 12/27/2019 5:22:00 PM

Aloha, William. True words spoken my friend. Congratulations on your win.

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/27/2019 5:34:00 PM

Ditto, on rather your 1st place win Charles, my compliments indeed ~ Aloha always William

Date: 12/27/2019 3:11:00 PM

Yes, I've wanted to say this to several people... well penned, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/27/2019 3:18:00 PM

Too late when you put on the ring...lol--btw, my compliments on your 1st place win! ~ Aloha always William

Date: 12/27/2019 2:32:00 PM

William, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/27/2019 2:36:00 PM

Thank you Eve and same to you ~ Aloha always William

Date: 12/27/2019 12:35:00 PM

Poet not poetess...lol

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/27/2019 12:48:00 PM

I apologize for breaking your silence -- lol~ Aloha always William

Date: 12/27/2019 10:23:00 AM

thats not good.. so many like this.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/27/2019 10:29:00 AM

Many thanks, my poetess friend ~ Aloha always William