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Class Dismiss Your outer beauty that blinds me~but your inner ugliness I see. 2019 December 22 *2nd Place* One liner ~~Silent One
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Neumann Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 12:40 PM
Ouch. Painful.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 12:54 PM
When they say, "I do", should have said, "I don't" ... lol ~ Aloha always William
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 8:25 PM
I really like this, William. Yes, inner ugliness can be quite easy to see when you get to know certain people. Congrats on the win
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 8:34 PM
So true Andrea, many times after wedding bells, the truth eeks out, --thanks and my compliments to you as well ~ Aloha always William
Messina Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 5:22 PM
Aloha, William. True words spoken my friend. Congratulations on your win.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 5:34 PM
Ditto, on rather your 1st place win Charles, my compliments indeed ~ Aloha always William
Gauthier Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 3:11 PM
Yes, I've wanted to say this to several people... well penned, William.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 3:18 PM
Too late when you put on the ring...lol--btw, my compliments on your 1st place win! ~ Aloha always William
Roper Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 2:32 PM
William, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 2:36 PM
Thank you Eve and same to you ~ Aloha always William
One Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 12:35 PM
Poet not poetess...lol
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 12:48 PM
I apologize for breaking your silence -- lol~ Aloha always William
One Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 10:23 AM
thats not good.. so many like this.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 10:29 AM
Many thanks, my poetess friend ~ Aloha always William
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