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NOTES letters birthday cards bits of who he was my eyes flood as I watch mom guide his hands for thumbprints "my dad-once a man of letters"
Written on 06/28/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/18/2016 1:41:00 PM
Beautiful poem Sara. Congratulations on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 7/6/2016 6:11:00 PM
a very nostalgic one. I really like it, Sara. Big congrats.
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Date: 7/5/2016 12:07:00 PM
Congrats Sara to win on nice piece.
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Date: 7/5/2016 12:01:00 PM
Sara, this is so beautiful and moving! I love your entry. A top winner for me! Congratulations on your win. 7 ; )
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Date: 7/2/2016 1:22:00 PM
relishing your last lines, very descriptive, sara!.. fine congrats on your spot and thanks for gracing my contest..huggs
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Date: 6/29/2016 9:05:00 AM
A 7 for this well-written, bittersweet poem, Sara! Janice
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/29/2016 11:51:00 AM
thanks Janice,appreciate your visit!

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