Banjo Casto Poet Verse

Clarity In a Treasure Box

CARDS
Dark notes
Handwritten

Inscribed with despair
Torn by  blood  on edges
As triggers of war zone blast

“scripts lauding Dad’s heroism ”



Contest by nette onclaud
Clarity In A Treasure Box   6. 28.2016

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Andrea Dietrich July 6, 2016 at 6:05 PM UNIQUE and well done, Banjo. big congrats on your incredible win.

Connie Marcum Wong July 5, 2016 at 11:21 AM Wow! An entire movie conjured in this brief form Banjo. I see why this poem took top honors. An excellent and moving postscript. I loved how creative and uniquee this piece is. Congratulations on a very deserving first place! 7 ; ) Connie Marcum Wong July 5, 2016 at 11:24 AM Unique...my kindle always changes my words and I don't catch it.

Charlie Smith July 3, 2016 at 7:36 PM Congratulations Banjo, well done...

Paul Callus July 3, 2016 at 4:26 AM An excellent clarity poem and tribute, Banjo. Well done! Congratulations on being placed first. Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud July 2, 2016 at 1:03 PM trulyheartfelt, banjo... magnificent lines dirft effortlessly.. congrats on your top win and thanks for gracing my contest.. huggs

Sunita U.D Palawon July 2, 2016 at 12:00 PM Congrats on your win...great write:)