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Clarity Bestowed

The aqua tide lies serene clarity at the feet of the hardened earth.

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Skat A

Date: 7/25/2016 2:01:00 AM

clever line... Luke..skat

Len Gasun

Date: 2/28/2016 6:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win and on this very wonderful monuko my dear friend, Luke! Hugs and cheers! love, GL

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2016 4:53:00 PM

wow, I REALLY like this one a lot . Congrats on a well deserved win.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/22/2016 11:43:00 AM

The rocks loose their hard appearance when surrounded by the peaceful calm that you project around them, Luke. ~ Congratulations on a high flying win. // paul

Luke Irwin

Date: 2/22/2016 8:07:00 AM

Thank you so much for the kind words.

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 2/22/2016 8:03:00 AM

Congratulations Luke on your wonderful win in "In one line (monoku #7) write what you SEE or FEEL" contest. You are truly amazing! :) -hans

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/21/2016 10:10:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome win Luke..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 9:41:00 PM

well done Luke, I like the aqua TIDE, Congratulations on your awesome one line verse (monoku) what you SEE or FEEL win. It's an honor to have you support my contest once again. Stop by and enjoy my blog "Ashamed" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~