Clarity Bestowed

The aqua tide lies serene clarity at the feet of the hardened earth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A  Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 2:01 AM
clever line... Luke..skat
Gasun Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 6:14 AM
Congratulations on your win and on this very wonderful monuko my dear friend, Luke! Hugs and cheers! love, GL
Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 4:53 PM
wow, I REALLY like this one a lot . Congrats on a well deserved win.
Callus Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 11:43 AM
The rocks loose their hard appearance when surrounded by the peaceful calm that you project around them, Luke. ~ Congratulations on a high flying win. // paul
Irwin Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 8:07 AM
Thank you so much for the kind words.
Selfa Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 8:03 AM
Congratulations Luke on your wonderful win in "In one line (monoku #7) write what you SEE or FEEL" contest. You are truly amazing! :) -hans
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February 21, 2016 at 10:10 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win Luke..
A   Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 9:41 PM
well done Luke, I like the aqua TIDE, Congratulations on your awesome one line verse (monoku) what you SEE or FEEL win. It's an honor to have you support my contest once again. Stop by and enjoy my blog "Ashamed" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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