Red Fiery Poet Rhyme

Clandestine Sinners

Clandestine Sinners 

HE Rises against her TIDES
The perfume she wears
is bound to hypnotise
His insatiable desires
are well acquainted with
her thoughts
Uninhibitedly, he unties
all her knots
His soul coalesced with
her cinnamon skin
For two strangers were
ready to sin

Copyright @ 2016 by Redfiery

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James Marshall Goff April 22, 2017 at 9:18 AM Line 9 in symbiosis with line 10...nicely done!

Debbie Duncan April 15, 2017 at 1:15 AM Love it :)

Arthur Vaso October 30, 2016 at 7:32 PM Sounds more like love than sin! Loved this

Paul Callus October 24, 2016 at 4:00 PM Hi Red...I bet that perfume is called 'seduction'! She knows what she's after, and the same applies to him! Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich October 18, 2016 at 3:20 PM wow, that is a sexy poem, Red Fiery. I Like it A LOT. SEVEN

Poet Destroyer A September 24, 2016 at 11:49 PM hello My, dearest Red Fiery, I'm so glad to read this very tasty poem. The imagery is breathtaking. my-my on the ending... Love it. LINDA

Just James September 13, 2016 at 2:42 PM Subtly brilliant! Well done!

CayCay Godwin September 5, 2016 at 10:40 PM If this is related to addiction (saw SO's remark), I didn't get it - I truly thought man + woman = sin in a clever poem. I like it very much, as I took it .. CayCay