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Clandestine Sinners

Clandestine Sinners 

HE Rises against her TIDES
The perfume she wears
is bound to hypnotise
His insatiable desires
are well acquainted with
her thoughts
Uninhibitedly, he unties
all her knots
His soul coalesced with
her cinnamon skin
For two strangers were
ready to sin

Copyright @ 2016 by Redfiery

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 4/22/2017 9:18:00 AM
Line 9 in symbiosis with line 10...nicely done!
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Date: 4/15/2017 1:15:00 AM
Love it :)
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Date: 10/30/2016 7:32:00 PM
Sounds more like love than sin! Loved this
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Date: 10/24/2016 4:00:00 PM
Hi Red...I bet that perfume is called 'seduction'! She knows what she's after, and the same applies to him! Hugs // paul
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Date: 10/18/2016 3:20:00 PM
wow, that is a sexy poem, Red Fiery. I Like it A LOT. SEVEN
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Date: 9/24/2016 11:49:00 PM
hello My, dearest Red Fiery, I'm so glad to read this very tasty poem. The imagery is breathtaking. my-my on the ending... Love it. LINDA
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Date: 9/13/2016 2:42:00 PM
Subtly brilliant! Well done!
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Date: 9/5/2016 10:40:00 PM
If this is related to addiction (saw SO's remark), I didn't get it - I truly thought man + woman = sin in a clever poem. I like it very much, as I took it .. CayCay
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