L Milton Hankins Poet Triolet

Clamor of the Midway

Clamor of the midway delights our ears
Calliopes from the old merry-go-round,
Shouts of the barkers, games one hears
Clamor of the midway delights our ears,
Squeals of children, roller coaster fears
Combine to make up that special sound,
Calliopes from the old merry-go-round
Clamor of the midway delights our ears.

Written August 22, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger August 23, 2022 at 9:29 AM The consistency here makes it a marvleous poem! L Milton Hankins August 23, 2022 at 11:17 AM Thank you, Caren. I hoped so.

Robert Gorelick August 22, 2022 at 7:32 PM A nostalgic carnival of delight. Enjoyed your triolet. Robert L Milton Hankins August 23, 2022 at 7:32 AM Thanks so much, Robert. For the first time in years, I went to the State Fair this week. It was a very enjoyable adventure.

Jenna Logan August 22, 2022 at 3:12 PM Remnant thoughts of the State Fair? I hope you had fun. Jenna Logan August 22, 2022 at 4:56 PM It doesn't matter if you walked, ran or were pushed. What DOES matter is that you were there and you enjoyed the day. L Milton Hankins August 22, 2022 at 4:24 PM Yep. I really enjoyed my day at the fair. Of course I had to be pushed around all day in a wheelchair, but I did enjoy it.