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Claimless Torch

I am immersed into your darkness As I wait for your return Holding on to Amber claimless If I let loose you'll feel the burn You lit a torch into my vein Did you kindle it with care As the empty sky desists its reign Will it distend my hungry stare

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Date: 10/10/2020 1:21:00 AM
I am enjoying your metaphoric write my friend!
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Date: 10/6/2020 10:24:00 PM
Darkness can take along time to dissipate. One might turn to a different light depending on the circumstances. ~~
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/7/2020 8:03:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. :)
Date: 10/6/2020 9:55:00 PM
very nice...I esp. like your ending lines :)
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/7/2020 8:04:00 AM
Thank you, Susan. :)

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