Civil Union

By the way, Have you felt the stick today?
Missed a support payment or alimony?

How’s it feel to live in the land of the free?
Surely, this is NOT civility.

By the way, can you afford the heat?
Does your menu include gene-altered meat?

In a civil land, surely all would be fed.
In a civil land, all would have roofs and beds.

How’s it feel to have no obvious choice 
run by a government who won’t hear your voice?

By the way, have you paid for the water you drink,
because you don’t trust, the kitchen sink’s?

Certainly civility should and would decree
a clean, functioning place to simply pee?

Would a civil nation arrest and detain
so many strangers to receive a water boards’ pain?

Does civil society require your passport chipped? 
Does a nation of laws allow phone calls clipped?

Each country claims to be this mythical land
where the masses are cared for, given a hand.

In this Never Neverland no one would stay sick.
We'd all live good life’s without carrying the stick.

In this Never Neverland we'd live proudly free
represented by goodness in grand civility.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dvorkis Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 9:54 AM
hey wise one. missed you too! I like the intention you give here which is for everyone to stop believing society speaks for them. I don't buy into a civil utopia either. If I didn't have a job I would starve to death sooner or later. It's that simple. but then no one wants a dystopia either. So in the end you get a split society that wants to both keep the rich rich and also not watch the masses starve. Starving poor people makes rich people feel guilty. :) I'll be back from time to time.
Mehta Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 11:07 PM
Wish you all the best if it is contest entry. I enjoyed reading couplets with a fine rhyming
Ryerson Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 8:10 PM
Civility indeed, Deb!...I assume this is an entry to the contest? Great argument! (though you MUST know by now I must respectifully disagree with the politics?) But who cares?...Lets fight and argue and then finally sort it all out! - Tim
Haick Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 2:11 PM
Fantastic, Deborah...you've hit it square on its head...civility is a word that so many people don't know the meaning of.. Goes to my favs., today...Peace, audrey
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 1:03 PM
ps Love the title you gave this too.
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 1:01 PM
Good one, DEb. WE do not seem so civilized in the end, do we. It's really a shame what is happening to some of the truly poor. Thanks so much for voting on five words. LUv ya, andrea
Joseph Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 9:39 AM
a lot to think about
A   Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 8:22 AM
Enjoyed like always. P.D.
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