Citine Kisses

moon 
                     h u m s to 
          nightfall 
 awaiting sun's 
                         c i t r i n e 
                                         k
                                           i
                                             s
                                               s ~
   as night 
                  b
                    a
                      t
                        o
                          n
                            s 
                               day
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May 4, 2025 at 10:07 AM
Oh sis we did hiku this week together! Hah! I love your use of citrine here and the way your last line falls, clever and very picturesque and creative! Theres a dreamy vibe to your imagery! Pleasure reading you today! Best wishes!!
Jama Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 5:27 PM
Yes sis at this point we now the haiku crew. I'm glad you enjoyed my one. All the best for your also.
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