Circumstances of Life

Bent with age circumstances of life shaped trunk
Strong green limbs and branches shine
Distant storm approaches

lifenaturekimo

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Jack Horne

March 9, 2012 at 3:44 PM

love this clever piece, Sara - kimo seems an interesting form

Andrea Dietrich

March 9, 2012 at 3:12 PM

Hmmm, maybe you are trying out three for the tree contest. Let me go see the last one.

Joe Maverick

March 8, 2012 at 7:24 PM

Good observant piece Sara; enjoyed reading a lot..!

Russell Sivey

March 8, 2012 at 5:11 PM

This was the approach I was expecting the other poem to go into, it's nice to see this route being used creatively and accurately! You have written a truly wonderful write here my friend! I really enjoyed the last line immensely, "Distant storm approaches" it tells of an aboding storm that can do damage to our peaceful characteristic tree! I love your poem Sara! Great Work!!

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