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Circling Around

first you’re up and then you’re down going in circles smiles and frowns you move to the left when you should’ve right take a wrong turn no clear signs mind is spinning too many thoughts no matter what you can’t turn it off close your eyes but you can’t sleep relief doesn’t come from all this grief one step forward two steps back too many bends erased tracks wheels keep turning circling around can’t see the sun with all these clouds the tunnel is dark and very deep falling fast with no reprieve

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/9/2009 11:38:00 AM
It is Sunday afternoon here and I am so happy to share this time reading your fantastic poetry J B. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2009 5:57:00 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Sara
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