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2/19/2025 for Poetry Comes in All Kinds of Shape Poetry Contest sponsored by Vanya Evangeline

Everywhere I look, I see you. You are perfect. The same from every angle, yet you can be many things, the giver of life, the supplier of all energy. Life itself follows your pattern, over and over, round and round. You are in the colorful, fragrant offerings of lovers. I look into your shimmering blue and fall in love, falling inside and down, down, down, disappearing. I see you in the sky at night, and grow wild, and howl, terrorizing a city. I take you for a ride and end up where I started. Everywhere I look, I see you. You are perfect.

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