Cinquian

Poison

silently kills

my miserable soul

elucidating my weak heart

I’ll die.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Shahwan Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 5:31 AM
Beautiful piece indeed.
Shahwan Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 5:30 AM
Very nice cinquain. As a piece of art it's a beautiful poem; ryhmes. As a piece of reality be careful. Staying alive is more productive. All the best.
Shahwan Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 5:30 AM
Beautiful piece indeed.
Heck Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 4:39 AM
Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
Winter Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 9:10 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
November 1, 2008 at 4:51 PM
Amour - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
Brown Avatar
October 28, 2008 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Young Avatar
July 15, 2008 at 8:05 PM
Emo?
Degenhardt Avatar
July 15, 2008 at 4:48 AM
This is wonderful in form, yet the subject is sad or morose even. Clear though and expressed very well. Michael
Brown Avatar
July 11, 2008 at 4:26 AM
Welcome to poetrySoup Amour. Excellent writing. Please continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol
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