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Cinquian

Poison silently kills my miserable soul elucidating my weak heart I’ll die.

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Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/29/2009 5:31:00 AM

Beautiful piece indeed.

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/29/2009 5:30:00 AM

Very nice cinquain. As a piece of art it's a beautiful poem; ryhmes. As a piece of reality be careful. Staying alive is more productive. All the best.

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/29/2009 5:30:00 AM

Beautiful piece indeed.

John Heck

Date: 11/30/2008 4:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/11/2008 9:10:00 AM

Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/1/2008 4:51:00 PM

Amour - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/28/2008 8:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Cayetano Young

Date: 7/15/2008 8:05:00 PM

Emo?

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 7/15/2008 4:48:00 AM

This is wonderful in form, yet the subject is sad or morose even. Clear though and expressed very well. Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/11/2008 4:26:00 AM

Welcome to poetrySoup Amour. Excellent writing. Please continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol