Richard Lamoureux Poet Cinquain

Cinquain One

Hate
Distorts minds
Drags us away
Without us knowing it
Destroys


Dedicated to Judy Konos, check out her Cinquain.  Thanks 
Judy for providing the description on how to write this form.

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Timothy Hicks May 6, 2013 at 12:33 AM I've felt this way before. Hating so much that you lose your rational thoughts along the way... it never ends well. Richard Lamoureux May 6, 2013 at 6:45 AM How did you resolve your feelings?

Donna Jones May 3, 2013 at 3:59 PM Absolutely....love it Richard... Richard Lamoureux May 3, 2013 at 9:55 PM Thanks Donna, I enjoyed the challenge of a new form. This one felt right somehow.

Judy Konos May 3, 2013 at 10:04 AM Very Powerful... I think we may have a new Cinquain King.... Richard Lamoureux May 3, 2013 at 3:46 PM This poem would not have happened if I hadn't read yours. Thanks for the inspiration.

Colleen Bono May 3, 2013 at 8:43 AM powerful but true. Richard Lamoureux May 3, 2013 at 3:45 PM Thanks Colleen