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Cinquain One

Hate Distorts minds Drags us away Without us knowing it Destroys Dedicated to Judy Konos, check out her Cinquain. Thanks Judy for providing the description on how to write this form.

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/6/2013 12:33:00 AM

I've felt this way before. Hating so much that you lose your rational thoughts along the way... it never ends well.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2013 6:45:00 AM

How did you resolve your feelings?

Donna Jones

Date: 5/3/2013 3:59:00 PM

Absolutely....love it Richard...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/3/2013 9:55:00 PM

Thanks Donna, I enjoyed the challenge of a new form. This one felt right somehow.

Judy Konos

Date: 5/3/2013 10:04:00 AM

Very Powerful... I think we may have a new Cinquain King....

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/3/2013 3:46:00 PM

This poem would not have happened if I hadn't read yours. Thanks for the inspiration.

Colleen Bono

Date: 5/3/2013 8:43:00 AM

powerful but true.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/3/2013 3:45:00 PM

Thanks Colleen