Cinquain Five

Starving wanting affection eating fast food devouring a strangers embrace Hungry

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2013 2:37:00 PM

yes, sometimes the emotional hunger is tied to the physical. Sadly, not in my case. haha. I just love food!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/6/2013 7:32:00 AM

Great play on words and theme..Enjoyed reading this morn..So much hunger in the world in triplet _ food for the body and food for the emotion and food for the spirit are lacking today..Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2013 7:39:00 AM

Sadly I believe for many generations it has been lacking. We simply fail to recognize it in our own. We all hunger and there is only one place that hunger can be truly satisfied.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/6/2013 12:29:00 AM

Wow, I like how you connect a strangers embrace with "grabbing a quick bite". It might fill you up for a bit, but it won't satisfy (as a loved one's embrace would). Your best cinquain so for, methinks!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2013 7:36:00 AM

Thanks Tim, I am pleased you like it.

Judy Konos

Date: 5/5/2013 5:20:00 PM

You Go Richard......really great!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/5/2013 7:17:00 PM

Thanks Judy