Cinquain # 12 and 35(With Apologies To Bob Dylan)

Walking 
Walking real fast
Walk on gossamer wings
Walking like the vision that you are
Walking
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Culverhouse Avatar
October 10, 2009 at 6:51 PM
nicely penned
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October 10, 2009 at 9:27 AM
Interesting use of repetition for a thought provoking poem. I really like the third line. Keep on writing! Karen
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October 7, 2009 at 10:29 AM
I love Bob Dylan my friend, this is a fabulous write, I could almost hear him lending voice to your well penned words. Thank you for sharing the read. :-) Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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October 6, 2009 at 4:08 PM
Bob Dylan is an awesome source of inspiration. Keep walking, Matthew, but please stop and grace us with more of your writing whenever your legs tire. This is a lovely image! Love, Carolyn
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October 4, 2009 at 5:42 PM
Matthew, I couldn't help reading this with a Bob Dylan voice in my head! :o) Nice to see anything you post, my friend! Donna
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October 3, 2009 at 9:48 AM
Interesting write. I like the repetition here. Keep writing. Sara
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