Cindys Butterfly

but in mind of eye butterfly cavorts and dies, in another grub she does resort, returns again her time is short, so beautiful is the why, she is part of the changing tapestry, of the one creators eye. thank you Baby lou Don

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Date: 3/6/2012 3:49:00 PM
Butterflys are magical creatures, who seem to lift the gloom, though your heart is heavy, spring seems to really bloom. Blest with a daughter an the butterflys, Cindy Lu with her sweet surprise, then favored in the sweet Lords eyes, a blessing in this tune...
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Date: 3/7/2012 8:15:00 AM
I truly adore you my lovely Bubby, you are unique and a blessed man of our Lord God almighty, with wit that God gave you as each of you, just not posting but I will always look and remark a bit of what you are doing. Giving a certain gent, some space and time to think~ love, Baby aka Cindy Lu
Date: 3/6/2012 7:06:00 AM
so as to say, I get the sweetness in life from my only daughter who is very sweet to me :)
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Date: 3/6/2012 7:04:00 AM
She posts poems here too, one is called wildflower, she is a much better poetess than I, we always want our children to surpass us in all things; her name is Meagan Price.
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Date: 3/6/2012 7:03:00 AM
THANK YOU Bubby! So truthful and beautiful, as we go through different spiritual renewals in our life; I always think of the butterfly, besides, my daughters was shy in preschool and wouldn't talk, then outside she saw a butterfly, and she blurted out butterfly!! that was her name growing up, and then a few Christmas's ago she gave me a pr of gold earings that were butterflies, so needless to say I love my daughter and have been trying to be a butterfly every since that time :) Love, Cindy Lu
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Date: 3/6/2012 1:46:00 AM
Another fine piece of work Don, we used to collect them as kids keep em in a jar and watch them bloom, then watch them fly away..wonderful...Dave
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Date: 3/5/2012 4:25:00 PM
Yes, such great poetry Don! It's been awhile since I've read a poem of yours Don...I hate missing them too, I miss your creative writes so very much! Like this extremely creative poem here my friend! The last line is my favorite in the whole write, "of the one creators eye." Self explanatory I must say, even standing on its own! I love your imaginative poem that you have written! I love your poem tons! Great Work!!
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