Cindy Caytons Step Up

"the path to paradise is really worth the price, where is me bed-pan nurse, bowels gone inta reverse... oh fine... still love ya babe.... till im swinging in the hearse.." on ya Cindy Don
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 6:13 PM
sort-of casual off the hip, flippty flap floppity flip, brain jabber, not so wise, a quip....
Maverick Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 3:42 PM
A pretty in ya' face write here Don quite a light write as I see it..)
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July 4, 2012 at 8:44 AM
I know, was a bit flirty wasn't I. I'll be have now, I have my moments Bubby... Love ya a bunch and me thinks I am being repremanded by my lovely Bubby. Why did you go to the bad one, and not the other ones? I suggest Rainbow, or tender surrender, or The Path~ they are much better, love ya anyhow, because you did catch me in the act, as for I figure if you can't beat em, join em, and just wanted to kiss someone, Bubby, I will behave now. OK? Lu
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July 3, 2012 at 4:52 PM
This is quite the interesting write my friend! I enjoyed the creativity you devoted to writing this fabulous poem! The line, "swinging in the hearse" is hilarious Don! Awesome Work!!
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