Cinderella's Advice

If Cinderella coached the team each fall
She’d tell her players, “Just keep your eye on the ‘ball’.”

November 24, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Canerdy Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 10:30 PM
Very imaginative--Congrats! Janice
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November 29, 2015 at 9:25 PM
Hi David, LOL, she needs to become the coach of the Dallas Cowboys. Jason G... has fallen asleep before the football season begun this year in SEPT. Love the poem. LINDA
Merryman Avatar
November 25, 2015 at 11:52 PM
Clever, David! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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November 24, 2015 at 6:04 PM
David, Congratulations on your awesome and sweet Epigram couplet win. Have yourself a wonderful, blessed Thanksgiving Day. Love SKAT
Negron Flores Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 4:38 PM
Congratulations David
Allison Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 2:51 PM
ha ha love it congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 12:02 PM
Excellent in its uniqueness and presentation, David. Congratulations... a merited win! // paul
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November 24, 2015 at 10:17 AM
David, good write! Congrats on your win:-) Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 9:23 AM
this was AWESOME!! Congrats on the win
Roper Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 9:14 AM
Haha.... Love this! Congratulation on your win!
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