Cinco De Mayo

Packed a picnic for the middle of the night,
sandwiches,chocolet stawberrys , liqueur taste just right,
 Smoke a lil sumthin to make us feel so light,
My baby sister here, we can never feel so tight,
 One candle burning flickering just right,
Here with our loves, the moon shines so bight,

 We walk through the trails, to stretch our legs and feel the air,
we get so spooked we run back feeling fear,
 We laugh out loud to clear the air,
 Enjoy this time from here to there,
Cinco de mayo is outa sight,

We love each other all so right.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 11:38 PM
cute one, and congratulations on your win, venessa
Devonshire Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 10:11 AM
Venessa, this moonlit picnic sounds like so much fun. Congratulations on your success in Carol's Picnic Contest! Love, Carolyn
Poet Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 6:28 PM
Congrats venessa on your HM in this contest of Carol.
Freeman Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 6:10 PM
Venessa, good to see you Honorably Mentioned with this great one. Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, Moses
Taylor Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 7:54 AM
Congrats on your HM, Venessa. Nice going. xxxRalph
Mehta Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 7:14 AM
My congratulations on this HM win in the contest of carol, Venessa
Sweetheart Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 5:22 AM
Congrats Venessa on your HM in the picnic contest with this delightful write luv.. enjoy your special honor for excellence and creativity ..
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 5:03 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Venessa. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 1:58 PM
oh, is this for the picnic contest? if so, what a delightful way to do it by using the title of Cinco de mayo!
Mehta Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 5:37 AM
Nice perspective to enjoy a picnic, venessa
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