Cinco De Mayo

Packed a picnic for the middle of the night,
sandwiches,chocolet stawberrys , liqueur taste just right,
 Smoke a lil sumthin to make us feel so light,
My baby sister here, we can never feel so tight,
 One candle burning flickering just right,
Here with our loves, the moon shines so bight,

 We walk through the trails, to stretch our legs and feel the air,
we get so spooked we run back feeling fear,
 We laugh out loud to clear the air,
 Enjoy this time from here to there,
Cinco de mayo is outa sight,

We love each other all so right.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/20/2011 11:38:00 PM
cute one, and congratulations on your win, venessa
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Date: 5/19/2011 10:11:00 AM
Venessa, this moonlit picnic sounds like so much fun. Congratulations on your success in Carol's Picnic Contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:28:00 PM
Congrats venessa on your HM in this contest of Carol.
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:10:00 PM
Venessa, good to see you Honorably Mentioned with this great one. Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:54:00 AM
Congrats on your HM, Venessa. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:14:00 AM
My congratulations on this HM win in the contest of carol, Venessa
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:22:00 AM
Congrats Venessa on your HM in the picnic contest with this delightful write luv.. enjoy your special honor for excellence and creativity ..
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Venessa. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/6/2011 1:58:00 PM
oh, is this for the picnic contest? if so, what a delightful way to do it by using the title of Cinco de mayo!
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Date: 5/6/2011 5:37:00 AM
Nice perspective to enjoy a picnic, venessa
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