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Cigarette Sarcasm

Lets go spit smoke from between our worn lips
wouldnt it be fun to rott our lungs together?
feel the rat poison, the cancerious **** buring our throughts?
how about the smell of that delicious nicotine?
isnt it delightful how we can ruin our lives?
so nice we can kill our selves this way
you know...
slowley? painfully? sinfully?
oh! and i love how everyone hates us now
but its okay cuz we have these emphizema on a sticks
we dont need anyone else, everyone else is just too smart..
oh and the best part, we cant live without it now.
ahh, great life huh?

*=changed because you cant put profanity on here..sadly.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/12/2016 12:15:00 AM
Keeley, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 4/12/2010 11:35:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Keeley. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/9/2010 9:22:00 PM
I enjoyed the sarcasm in the poem A good write
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Date: 4/9/2010 8:48:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... emotional ... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/9/2010 7:38:00 PM
great emotion, Keely, very much the reader feels your energy...even without cussin! we do have youngins' visit to create here, thats why we can't cuss! I think thats a good trade-off to keep a generational presence here safe from harsh language that may model words that could make their life harder if they imitate...just my opinion! nice poem! jimbo
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