Christmas Without You

fewer gifts to wrap
for under the Christmas tree
outside the snow falls


For: Fall or Winter Holiday Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
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November 12, 2021
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Calasibetta Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 2:41 PM
Congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. You painted a lovely scene in your Haiku. Blessings, Paulette
Roper Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 6:40 PM
Chetta, lovely imagery. Congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. Hugs and lots of love Eve
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 3:18 AM
I have read your winning work and was delighted that it was in the winners' list. Congrats. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 7:03 PM
A poignant one here. Congrats on the win.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 9:30 AM
We have that here too..less presents to wrap. Congratulations, Chetta!
Allison Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 5:11 PM
beautiful in its sadness, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 12:28 PM
Chetta, a well done sad haiku, congratulations on your winning placement!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 5:34 AM
Same here. Mom died in April. A different kind of year. ~ hugs
Achara Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 12:40 PM
I am sorry for your loss. My mom just turned 87. I spend as much time with her as I can.
Rose  Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 3:15 PM
I can feel the sadness in your haiku, well written and very feelingly done. :)
Achara Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 3:16 PM
Thank you. Each year there are fewer family and friends with whom to celebrate.
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