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Christmas Without a Christmas Tree

Glittery Christmas Filled cavity on my mind Christmas ain't yet come ************************** Sight flickering glare Alternately trap my eyes But shines ain't for me *************************** Christmas, dear Christmas Be the present of my tears Tiny hug in missed **************************** A tree full of lights Shimmered warm, deep on my cries Sad memories blinked **************************** Pretty past inhaled When time puts togetherness Now just three of us **************************** New family tree The Santa's gift as mercy God truly blessed me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/15/2012 7:26:00 AM
I hope you and your husband have a joy filled Christmas and that all your sadness is but a distant memory. Hugs Rick
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/15/2012 10:36:00 AM
Thanks Richard, you too :D Have a wonderful happy holiday of Christmas :D - Hug, Yanny
Date: 11/24/2012 7:00:00 AM
Hi thank you so much Yanny for reading my work, I see you are into haiku, I am only learning. Thanks sweetie for your time and comments.xx
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Date: 11/23/2012 9:56:00 PM
some of these are sure sad, but I really enjoyed reading them. Great idea for Christmas coming!!
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Date: 11/22/2012 6:59:00 PM
Well written Haikus but each one reflecting sadness and gloom. Cheer up young lady. Christmas is not the time for gloom. Shine like the lights on the Christmas tree and laugh your sorrows away. Thanks Yanny for visiting my Tanka Test of Love and your thought provoking comments. -Mohammad
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/23/2012 6:27:00 PM
Thank you very much Mohammad for your cheering comment, sure I would enjoy my Christmas this year, indeed Christmas should be in a happy momento :D, thank you for stopping by to my page, it is really a pleasure to have you in here as well :D
Date: 11/22/2012 5:37:00 PM
I feel a sadness in this one..Like a child has grown up and gone on their own or some other reason..Enjoyed reading your expressive Haiku..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/22/2012 5:55:00 PM
Thank you Sara for your kindly visit to my page :D, it is also a sad moment for me when I could not celebrate Christmas with the complete member of my beloved family, but still feel grateful with all of the things which I have for this moment :) - Hug, Yanny
Date: 11/22/2012 5:36:00 PM
Yanny, a sad image,,, good haiku....pd
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/22/2012 5:42:00 PM
Thank you PD, it's really a pleasure to have a visit by you today :D-Hug, Yanny
Date: 11/22/2012 9:15:00 AM
Outstanding yarn of haikus my dear friend, Yanny! I love them all! Christmas is really fast approaching but a little sadness I feel being away from my family! Well, advance merry merry Christmas! Two thumbs up for your outstanding poems! Good luck and best wishes always. love and hugs, Leonora
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/22/2012 9:21:00 AM
Thank you Leonora it's really a sweet comment of you :) wishing you a happy holiday too :D