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Christmas Tree

First Christmas without you, my dearest, my love Cruelly taken too soon on the wings of a dove How can I rejoice when my heart broke in two Those memories still vivid of my last days with you No holly, no ivy are decking the hall No Christmas cards; no Christmas tree; nothing at all Awakening early on this Christmas day morn I watch the sun rising, for it’s just before dawn The full moon is shining, like a beacon from afar And very close to me there is a twinkling, silver star I am pulled towards my garden as the dawn begins to break And gently wipe sleep from my eyes; I need to be awake The moon shines down so brightly, as if to celebrate Illuminating my old Fir tree, adorned with snowflakes twinkling at me I venture closer to my tree to witness tiny birds a fluttering A nightingale perched on the top, a joyous song she’s uttering I watch this magical scene unfold in wondrous disbelief and dabbing tears of joy and love with my Christmas handkerchief That twinkling, silver star is Venus; known as the Goddess of love I feel your love enveloping me as she twinkles and sparkles above For somehow Mother Nature has, in all her Christmassy glory Gifted me a happy end to my grief-stricken Christmas story Written 10th December 2018 Competition: Christmas Tree Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton 5th place in Premier Contest Contest A BRIAN STRAND COUPLET Sponsor Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Kim Merryman

Date: 7/29/2021 8:26:00 PM

A moving Christmas poem, Ann! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M

Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/3/2021 8:05:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Kim for your congrats and blessings. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/29/2021 9:16:00 AM

So inspiring and uplifting Ann. What a beautiful Christmas gift you opened that brought to you "a happy end." This is quite lovely and very tender. Congratulations!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/3/2021 8:04:00 AM

Aww Sam you have such a way with words they feel like a hug... with kindest thoughts and hugs Ann xx

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/29/2021 3:54:00 AM

A Beautifully created Couplet. Congratulations on your win!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/3/2021 8:03:00 AM

Dear Christuraj thank you my friend... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/28/2021 7:30:00 PM

Touches the heart … deep emotions, gradually embracing life again. Congrats on your win, Ann!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/3/2021 8:02:00 AM

Thank you so much US so glad my words touched your heart my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/7/2019 6:49:00 PM

Hello Ann, when you lose a spouse Christmas is hard to celebrate. But it gets better as the years goes by. A lovely poem. have a nice evening my friend.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/7/2019 7:14:00 PM

Thank you so much Darlene for your comforting comments, yes my dear husband passed on the 27th December 2008, as you say, it does get better, but I still have my moments and wish he was still here. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/21/2018 9:55:00 PM

Ann, the tree you describe does seem to be a Christmas gift from a lost loved one. Imagine having turquoise Venus shining through the limbs as the beautiful birds adorn the tree like ornaments. A living tree! Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/22/2018 12:14:00 AM

Yes that is a wonderful image Carolyn. Thanks for your congrats; sending you and your loved ones kindest Christmassy thoughts, Ann xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/21/2018 10:23:00 AM

Lovely, Ann. A very touching poem. Congrats on your win.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/23/2018 3:21:00 AM

Thanks so much Line glad you liked it. Kindest Christmassy thoughts to you and your loved ones, Ann xx

Jan Allison

Date: 12/20/2018 2:13:00 PM

Oh Ann this is so beautifully penned,such a touching take on the contest theme by finding beauty in nature at a sad time in one's life. Adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/20/2018 2:19:00 PM

Oh thank you so much Jan for your wonderful comments, I do so appreciate them. Kindest Christmassy wishes to you and your loved ones from Ann xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/20/2018 8:16:00 AM

BEAUTIFUL poem, ANN! CONGRATS! Janice

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/20/2018 8:20:00 AM

Thank you Janice, that is a lovely comment. Kindest Christmassy thoughts Ann xx

P.S. Awtry

Date: 12/20/2018 7:09:00 AM

Congratulations! I can just see the tree decorated by nature, and love the idea of Venus shining on the top! well done :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/20/2018 8:05:00 AM

Thank you PS for your lovely comments. During November & December in the UK and on clear mornings I have been witnessing the beauty of Venus, as it shines like the morning star in the East - it is stunning! Kindest Christmassy thoughts Ann xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/20/2018 5:43:00 AM

Congratulations for your great win :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/20/2018 5:50:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi, I loved your poem too, congrats and sending you and your loved ones kindest Christmassy thoughts, Ann xx

Eve Roper

Date: 12/13/2018 6:37:00 PM

Ann, great imagery of sadness and winter. Good luck in the contest.. Have a very Merry Christmas

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/14/2018 1:41:00 AM

Thank you so much Eve for your lovely comments. Sending you and your loved ones lots of Christmassy wishes with kindest thoughts from Ann xx