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Christmas Thoughts

Christmas thoughts
running thoughts of love for you still fall upon my minds thoughts
for winter days are moving in so quickly for all to see

my mind still so twisted like the leave in winter
fallen to the floor ready to perish
to the grounds open heart

for Christmas cheer
is so near
yeah
for all the trees lights that sparkle,twinkle in the dark nights
for fires burn so open to the cracking and popping
of pine wood

such sweet thought in my mind as Christmas come so near
so i hope by then you will be here holding my hand

for this will be my Christmas cheer .


the night walker

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/10/2010 1:48:00 PM
I could feel the pain ...your a beautiful soul my friend...Keep up the poems....Thanks for all your comments on my work
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Date: 11/29/2010 1:06:00 PM
Nov. 29, 2010 Aloha! You've got a well written poem for Christmas! It decribes how you would want your Christmas to be!!! Well penned! Good! LadyPoetry
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Date: 11/18/2010 10:13:00 PM
Excellent write my friend. I feel you reaching out to one whose afar. Continue to share and thank you for stopping by reading my work
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Date: 11/17/2010 10:24:00 AM
I hope she returns to you before Christmas as well, Duncan. It's sad to spend holidays without the one we love most. Very moving poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/14/2010 8:42:00 AM
enjoyed your work this morning Duncan
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Date: 11/14/2010 6:25:00 AM
Xmas feelings of yours ring out in this interesting write...
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Date: 11/14/2010 6:14:00 AM
Very interesting thoughts you have penned on Christmas, duncan
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